but, i also wanted to share a few photos with you from my trip. this first is from nye, were we rang in the new year at a bar called old kings road. this was the door to the ladies' room.

the sinks in the mens' room also were out of order, but i guess we could duece if needed.
the second photo i took because of word choice. it was outside of the restaurant we had breakfast at on the first. is "your" the proper word?

here is a link to a definition of your.
so, i've been trying to rework the sentence so it seems better, at least to me.
the original:
we appreciate your not smoking here.
my first attempt:
we appreciate you not smoking here.
my complete rework:
thank you for not smoking here.
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